~ Patchouli Dreams

~ Patchouli Dreams

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~ Patchouli Dreams

 

 

Dancing thoughts

Spinning nights

Running visions

 

I touch you Patchouli dream, deeply within my reach

Your  waves of amber colored glory is as music

And moves  softly like a soap bubble in my universe

 

Waving air

Colors mixed

A turning world

 

I embrace your beauty like never before

Your sky is surreal bliss within the mix

Of my made up thoughts, and visions

 

Rocky Mountains

Aroma skies

Occult beauty

 

I can feel me light as a feather

Dancing in pure elusiveness

Free as the moon shines in the night

 

Drip me in Emerald

Soak my aura within

Let us melt in eternity

 

 Don’t wake me up ever again

Let me get lost in this beauty

And save my soul for  these Amber dreams

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

© 2012


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I have read a lot of your poems now, and you have a natural talent for poetry. I can't believe the emotions you can make others feel with your words.
The quote below is beautiful:
"Drip me in Emerald

Soak my aura within

Let us melt in eternity



Don’t wake me up ever again

Let me get lost in this beauty

And save my soul for these Amber dreams"

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

12 Years Ago

Lovely review, many thanks, and nice you read " a lot of my poems," hope they gave you reading pleas.. read more



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wow! beautiful work! painted an extraordinary picture in my mind. Keep up the awesome job!

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much.... xo
so lovely! I love the color sheme too that matches the picture, everything you write is so soothing, I love the painting and your words are divine as usual! :)

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12 Years Ago

Aw thankies Corset! you made me smile, glad you enjoyed! xo
Dreams filled with freedom and Passion are ones we wish to revisit often

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Poetic Beauty

12 Years Ago

Most welcome. I love those kind of dreams
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12 Years Ago

Oh me too... my brain exists half of them ;) lol
you really took me to your dream ,and I really want to be there because it seems such a lovely place to be. Beautiful job!

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12 Years Ago

Thank you very much Gregster xo
Not Your Typical New Yorker

12 Years Ago

You're welcome Sweet Elisa
Gorgeous...! Your writing is as silk to the ears and the eyes that read what is here to behold. Oh my damn you are good and I am in awe. Thank You...!


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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

realmwriter

12 Years Ago

Im sorry. Did I embarrass you? I certainly didn't mean to do such a thing as that though I do find b.. read more

12 Years Ago

Yay, now I see your answer... finally. You did not embarrass me at all. I just am humbled by your wo.. read more
realmwriter

12 Years Ago

Still so very welcome.

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Added on July 11, 2012
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Tags: Poetry, Poems, Asian, Patchouli, Amber, Colors, Dreams, Wishes, Culture, Psychedelic

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