~ Patchouli Dreams

~ Follow me

~ Patchouli Dreams

 

 

Dancing thoughts

Spinning nights

Running visions

 

I touch you Patchouli dream, deeply within my reach

Your  waves of amber colored glory is as music

And moves  softly like a soap bubble in my universe

 

Waving air

Colors mixed

A turning world

 

I embrace your beauty like never before

Your sky is surreal bliss within the mix

Of my made up thoughts, and visions

 

Rocky Mountains

Aroma skies

Occult beauty

 

I can feel me light as a feather

Dancing in pure elusiveness

Free as the moon shines in the night

 

Drip me in Emerald

Soak my aura within

Let us melt in eternity

 

 Don’t wake me up ever again

Let me get lost in this beauty

And save my soul for  these Amber dreams

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Aubin]

I have read a lot of your poems now, and you have a natural talent for poetry. I can't believe the emotions you can make others feel with your words.
The quote below is beautiful:
"Drip me in Emerald

Soak my aura within

Let us melt in eternity



Don’t wake me up ever again

Let me get lost in this beauty

And save my soul for these Amber dreams"

Lovely review, many thanks, and nice you read " a lot of my poems," hope they gave you reading pleasure :)

[A.A.Romanczuk]

oh how you write...i am drunk on these golden dreams of yours.

Hihi thank you dear one :) yes, that was the effect to give a bit :)

[A.A.Romanczuk]

:D oh the pleasure was mine, I am sure I can survive the day now having eaten of such amrita.

Wow, thank you again :)

[A.A.Romanczuk]

:) you're welcome :)

[Nautili]

i love this.....I have fond memories of the scent of patchouli. The picture, all in dreamy amber shades, complimented your verse perfectly. I wish my dreams were as imaginative and mind-altering....lol.

Oh, yours shall be dear. Thank you so much, when I studied Aroma Therapy a long time ago, Patchouli was one of them, I liked so much. xx

[Waelboy]

Simply, a mystic dream! A joyful trip.

Thanks :)

[Aehr]

this is BEAUTIFUL.... completely left me breathless... Amazing imagery, left me with my jaw dropped open. This is just SUPERB... No other words to describe how much I love this!

"...I can feel me light as a feather
Dancing in pure elusiveness
Free as the moon shines in the night

Drip me in Emerald
Soak my aura within
Let us melt in eternity

Don’t wake me up ever again
Let me get lost in this beauty
And save my soul for these Amber dreams..."

these lines were.... wonderful! Where do you get these ideas from!? (lol) ;) loved it!

Gotta shelve it!!!! Thank you for sharing such an amazing piece!
Beautifully painted!

Aw thank you deeply, I just translated my inner core, my dreams and my visions... So glad you loved it. Many thank yous.

E.L.

[Aehr]

you are very welcome.. loved it, honestly :)

Sigh, thank you deary! much love to India!

[Aehr]

:)

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Amazing and beautiful as a special dream, only chosen people could have! I love all of it,, now is one of my favorite poems! :) it sounds calm and refreshing in the same time, and I really feel myself lighter as feather...I always was attached to aromas, and wished I could define them inside my poems, u are so good in that!

Thank you my lovely! We know to reach that! hugs

[w]

Nice lyrical painting. Brings to mind many images that are quite clear. Nice job.

Thanks w for stopping by and taking the time to read me! :)

[w]

of course. it was my pleasure

[Distant horizons]

Beautiful and elegant, with a dreamlike quality to your words.

"Dancing in pure elusiveness
Free as the moon shines in the night"
love it:-)

Thankies :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Awestruck!...this is sheer beauty. Dreams can be so ethereal, taking us to such a heavenly place, and who would want to come down from the high?... I love, love, love this!

"I can feel me light as a feather
Dancing in pure elusiveness
Free as the moon shines in the night

Drip me in Emerald
Soak my aura within
Let us melt in eternity"~ Breathtaking!

Thank you sweet sis X

[Kimberly "Melody" Carne..]

"Drip me in Emerald

Soak my aura within

Let us melt in eternity"
Ah as always captivating such beauty of the unseen. Perfect. I loved it.

Thank you sissy! much love to you overthere xx