Always Going Home

Liar

Why I share your love,

I do not know, 

I am left alone,

While two hearts you own,

Fair not, I think,

To have so much, 

You say she's not,

As good as I, 

But I won't forget, 

How you always leave,

To go home to her 

Author's Note

Wrote this in about two minutes, just what was going through my head. Far too short to describe all the feelings I truly have for this particular topic.

Reviews

[Chris]

This is very good. Though it lacks imagery (sorry I'm a sucker for imagery) it makes up for in language.

I see potential in this piece. The last line says it all. I challenge you to put all your feelings that you have stored of this topic into a longer piece because I know thid has potential to be outstanding.