Let me Carry On!

Lo!

I have something to show you,

Before the Sun takes away my sight,

For the Moon cannot then help,

Let me carry on!

 

Hush!

I have something to tell you,

Before the wind fades my whisper,

For I have not strength to shout,

Let me carry on!

 

But

I had something to do else,

Now which has neither meaning nor need,

But an invisible-

He urges me, I cannot deny-

For I dare not deny;

Before the wave of time proves it to be late,

Let me carry on!

Author's Note

Thanks!

Reviews

[nevermindfan1991]

I was wondering when I would read another poem from you. This poem was a very interesting and intriguing poem. It was able to captivate me from beginning to end. I really liked the obliqueness of the poem but it also seemed very straightforward. Strange yet familiar. This poem seemed to employ several contradictions. I really enjoyed reading this. Great Job!

[Daytonight]

I really like this. Well done and thought out. Keep on penning.

[ClockWork GRIMM]

I continue to be thoroughly impressed...

[The fallen of innocence]

this is very lovely !!!

[stars are far]

This is so creative and lovely ..
i liked that :)

[Becky C Strukamp]

Most excellent from beginning to end

[Tasha]

I really liked this from beginning to end. Great piece!

[FallenHeroXx]

I like this a lot. I really got swept away by this! Good job keep it up!

[Coyote Poetry]

The wave of time can steal from us. We need to listen to the light whispers and hold on to the good things in a life. I like the ending to the excellent poem.
Coyote