Lost in my Lonesomeness

Lost in my Lonesomeness

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I start my day with a lonely heart
In a house that seems so empty
Cautious screams come out often
I’m afraid I’m the only is guilty
I look out of the window and I find
The horizon outside is boundless
And I find myself there, losing the game
Lost in my own lonesomeness.

I spend my time beside the window
Looking at the charming sky
The lights almost blind my eyes
Reminding me the cries
I look outside and I find little faces
Pairs of eyes, with innocence
And I find myself, away from them
Lost in my own lonesomeness.

I go out on the road, walk along
Thinking, may bring a change
But the roads seem deserted to me
As I’m standing just on the edge
I look around and I find
People are roaming aimless
And I find myself with the bloods I spread
Lost in my own lonesomeness.

I spend the night, trembling inside
Giving company to the nightmares
They remind me the works I do or did
Bringing me most of my fears
I look at the window and I find
The beauty of the night is the darkness
I find myself, alone in the bed
Lost in my own lonesomeness.

© 2011


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This is beautiful, yet saddening. I've felt like you, and you did a wonderful job painting the picture which so many of us feel. I loved the way you ended all your stanzas with the same line to really draw empahsis to the title you chose. Your word flow is elegant and great! You used fantastic imagery, which really drew me in...very nice job = ]

Posted 13 Years Ago


Amazin .. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


good one, its so nicely potrayed, the feelings are just splashing from the words, awesome .























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Posted 13 Years Ago


Great poem! I can really relate to this poem, I'm feeling like that right. I loved the repetition of the line "Lost in my own lonesomeness". Again, this was a great poem. Hey you have a chance can you check out my poems.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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