My Sweet Song

The moment is past.

My unforgiving moment is past.

The moment when he listened to my song.

My song is not of sorrow,

My song is not melancholy,

It’s jolly.

It’s divine for a feeling I have related.

It’s what my heart has created.

Still he cried.

He cried throughout the night,

Throughout the darkest night.

And I dreamt his tears.

I dreamt getting drowned into his pain.

No one could save me.

Whence someone played my song.

It flowed through my veins

And repaired my little heart,

My heart that was hurt.

And I felt, there’s nothing in the world for me.

Nothing but my song-

My sweet sweet song.

Author's Note

Thanks!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Many kind of songs. Some to make us cry and some to make us laugh. I like the internal story and the strong ending in your poem. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[BlackStar]

Wow, I can relate to this so much that I'm adding it to my shelf. beautiful, I wish that more writers write with such passion, or songwriters (because this can be a great song). :D

[theopenbook]

wow:) really the only thing that can soothe the pain is the song:) beautifully captured feelings with lovely verses:)

by the way are you Indian? me too!:)

[Muse]

perfect lyrics for a crying love sone. :)

[Scott Wilson]

Really powerful stuff :-) Good job :)

[JUSTWRITING]

Wow! Powerful poem!

[Gilbert Saint]

be very carefull when switching between first person and second person perspective, you writing may end up not making sense. But like the paper

[nevermindfan1991]

You never cease to amaze me....amazing poem. I'm tearing up a little...

[poeticweaver]

A beautifully worded piece of poetry that glues the reader to each wonderfully penned line. Thanks for sharing, and pen on poet! :)

Peace, poeticweaver~