The Throw-Aways

This is my darling. The one story that I have managed to keep most of my attention on for a long period of time. I request that you give honest opinions on it, just don't bash the hell out of it for no reason. If you see a typo, please...please let me know. While I've a beta-reader that goes over this as well as re-reading it again myself...sometimes we miss something.
Reviews & comments are greatly appreciated since I will be doing my damn best to publish this baby in the future. Also, for that reason there will probably be missing chunks from later chapters. Sorry in advance for that.