Breaking My Heart Open

This is a very complicated song. I had originally started this two years ago. I sent it to my then boyfriend. After we broke up he sent this song around and everyone laughed at it. I finally finished.

Oh, all this pain.

Please rearrange the lines in you game.

Maybe then this could change,

but for now it all remains the same.

You said that you cared,

you said that you'd always be there.

Now i see that all you did was just play me

Why oh why?

I'm Breaking my heart open for you tonight,

to see all the pain your game caused me.

All of the lies and all of the blames,

All wrapped up i hope your ashamed at yourself.

Because I'm breaking my heart open for you tonight.

~~This is the part i wrote after he sent it.

We were once so innocent,

but then you broke out,

and caused me regrets.

You tried everything.

You showed this song,

just so i couldn't siiinngg

Now Baby I'm breaking my heart open again tonight,

to see all the pain your game caused me.

All of the lies and all of the blames,

all wrapped up. I hope your ashamed at yourself.

Because i broke my heart open for you that night.

I hope now you see,

that i broke my heart open that night,

just so that you could leave.

I didn't want you then,

and i don't want you noowwww

And i need you to know,

that I'm not letting go.

The fire you started is taking control,

and its big and hard and incredibly tough.

And whatever you do it will never be enough,

because all that you've done is just adding uppppp

And now Baby I'm breaking my heart open again tonight,

to see all the pain your game caused me.

All of the lies and all of the blames,

all wrapped up. I hope your ashamed at yourself.

Because i broke my heart open for you that night.

For you that night, for you that niiighttt.

For, you, that, night.

Author's Note

This really means a lot to me. When he sent this song it broke me heart. I didn't write another song for over two years. This is the first time since then. Do you like it?

Reviews

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Do I like it? I loved it, it showed true feelings! I would love to hear it to music! Excellent Job

[Queen of Fantasy]

I really like and I think the guy sounds like a jerk!
Better of without him!
;)