Vertigo

Falling down,
crunchy brown
puddles of arboreal drool,
swaying and lurching
limbs in limbo

Lines
for writing
for parking
I am ruled by lines.
College-ruled.

Micro
like a bonsai
manicured to a T…
toe’s pedicure.

Tethered -
that one embarrassing
string of spit,
that too-long strand of vermicelli,
that invisible spider web
that clings
tenaciously
to autumn’s last
falling fruit.

Author's Note

Please let me know what you think of the piece. Thanks.

Reviews

[Cynthia]

I agree, its really a peice of special, I also never eead anything alike before, its really interesting and it caught readers attention :)
I love the idea of this poem, its really great!
Good Job!

[Sydney Evans]

I really liked this.
It is very unique and I've never read anything like it.
(: