Without you

As tears fall

Welling from deep within

I cry for what we once had

What I wanted but didn’t see

If I had known what I would have lost

How I much I miss you near

Then maybe I would have tried harder

To keep you close to me

I remember how you used to hold me

I remember you pulling me close

I think I loved you

I really think I did

Then I saw you walk away

Dragging my heart along

Why didn’t you listen to me

All I wanted was one last chance

As I see you everyday

My heart breaks a little more

I can’t get you out of my head

You have been ingrained into my heart

 

 

 

Reviews

[Ashley June Canfield]

Falling in love, is a part of growing up, and it just means that you're that much closer to finding the one you'll spend your life with.

Nice poem

[Pandora]

That is quite a load of emotion packed into this. Really beautifull, and dark...

[Incandescence]

This is the exact way of how I feel. I love it! The emotion is all in this short poem and carried out beautifully. Maybe its just cause I can relate to it so well, but either way, its really good. keep writing! :)

[Theodore]

very painful sad story i can relate to this one but im stronger to this day and i hope you are too..

[An owl on the moon]

What a painful confession... the loss of love.. the longing for what could have been... It makes one ache to read.. wondering what if.

[Stef Outsiders]

this is a amazing piece, Love is unpredictable, some fall harder than others... well done and keep writing...

[Misty Blue Eyes]

very nice write.

[Cherrie]

nothing like a broken heart to inspire and electrify

[Enitte]

Superb! It is beautiful and touchy. This is what happens when people get blinded with love and don't see what they have in front of them. At the end, it is too late.

[TheFunkyCactus]

Very beautiful and emotionally touching. My favourite line was "Then I saw you walk away, dragging my heart along." Fantastic imagery and a great metaphor. Loved it!~