MY FAVOURITE THINGS

SHARK

Big, scary

Swimming, eating, drinking

My favourite sea animal

Animal

MANGO

Yellow, delicious

Biting, Munching, enjoying

My favourite fruit

Fruit

CAMEL

Long, tall

Eats, walks, enjoys

My favourite desert animal

Animal

Reviews

[Weeping Willow]

I like everything but the shark

[Marie]

Really great descriptions, and you gave your poem a lovely form.

[CHRIS ANDES]

haha
this is very humurous
=]

[Coyote Poetry]

A very nice poem. Good description of the what is liked or disliked in the sea, desert and fruit. Thank you for the very good poem.
Coyote

[Shay]

I like sharks and mangos too, was cools

[Sarusai Hiryu]

Very interesting.

[stars are far]

haha.. that was so fast .. and inocent..
well done :)