Desperation

My words don't rhyme anymore
the rhythm is gone.
Like dewdrops on leaves
on a winter morn,

that fast fade
with the maturing day,
my rhythms and rhymes
have all faded away,

into disturbing noise
and meaningless prose,
that I wish I could not hear
I wish I didn't compose.

Reviews

[M.Babu]

"My words don't rhyme anymore
the rhythm is gone.
Like dewdrops on leaves
on a winter morn, "

We all feel like this at some point! How you've put it down in words is really easy to relate to my friend! Very good piece about desperation xD

Enjoyed this

[Lily Mae]

Sometimes our life's experience change our hearts and so our writing changes. I've gone through the same thing lately. But I keep trying to express myself and keep going despite the differences I feel.. Your an amazing poet and all is perfect:) xx

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

But the poem rhymes from your soul, written with compassion and meaning. Great poem my friend.

[Coyote Poetry]

My words have never rhyme. Better to show and tell of a world with so many great tales of good and bad. Writing is mainly emotion. When the emotion is dead. Hard to write anything. A strong poem. You open up many good questions. A excellent poem.

Coyote

[Stammers]

'that I wish I could not hear' this is so powerful. And I hate 'oh so powerful and heartfelt poetry' but that line has so much to offer.