While we were busy counting coins lost and gained, through all expenses, at the days' endings, worrying over the balance that remained, we planned wiser spendings.
All the while our wristwatches counted, with measured mechanical strokes of the second's hand, to what; the expenses of the coins of life; amounted, but we were too busy to understand.
Had we paid heed that this is something we cannot save and the balance is lesser at the days' endings, we would have been wise enough to plan, and brave, similar wiser spendings.
a twist of your tongue, a flick of the wrist, a wave of the magic wand, your watch is watching, counting? perhaps you should watch Stranger Than Fiction. i found this clever, and the repetition of the phrases "at the days endings" and "wiser spendings" added to the powerful message. nice work :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
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Expenses have to cared of..
money is important in life to buy something...
savings are important too for the future
i really enjoyed reading this..
thnx for sharing:)
A lot of wisdom in your words. A wise man or woman enjoy their life. Life can be very hard. But need to separate work from play. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote