Paranoid

A very short description of a paranoid mind .

Fear and terror ,
have scared trust away .
They have invited suspicion,
to come and stay .

The mind , phobic , paranoid ,
in an endless search for safer .
A straight line appears crooked
on a crumpled piece of paper .

Reviews

[Sukriti Suki]

Wow...the end is just so fantastic...you brought this piece together with the end.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. Honest and direct words. Easy to be paranoid in a world with no guarantees. I like the complete poem. A strong ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Ruth]

Intense!
A powerful and intoxicating infusion of such a topic, unsettling but great! xx

[M.Babu]

Masterly put down:
"The mind , phobic , paranoid ,
in an endless search for safer .
A straight line appears crooked
on a crumpled piece of paper ."

~M.Babu~

[Suchita]

Again one of your fine works... your expressions are much more stronger now.... Simply amazing...

[Valentine]

Very well said..Valentine

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Fear will definitely warp ones perception, well written Abhijit

[Lily Mae]

They way you tell this is excellent and I agree with everyone the last two lines brought it home for me.. maybe I can relate to that thought;) xx

[Tate Morgan]

you seem to know well one of the things that face all writers and poets and artists the uncertainty