A Strange Musing

A very beautiful sight caught my eye.
airborne dandelion seeds floating by.

Then, a very curious thought came to mind,
Are we too plants; but; of a different kind,

seeded by some strange seed unknown,
that brings life to flesh, blood and bone,

thus making us blossom like a flower,
and breaking free at life's closing hour,

like seeds from a matured pod, it flies,
invisible to the human eyes,

as we end in ashes or a tomb,
to fertile lands, a baby in a womb?

Reviews

[Clemmy]

you are a great writer, I love such topics... good stuff man, good stuff..

[kuru]

this is great just loved the feel to it and the insight..something to ponder on great job!

[Amanda_Rose]

i f*****g love this poem. it shoves beliefs down your throat and before you can even think of an opposing argument, its too late, the "seed" as been planted and i found myself agreeing with you 100%. great job

[Arabdha]

absolute brilliance...expressing philosophy in poetry is a rare art..and you are blessedly gifted with it..loved this one !!!

[Su' Nacnetaf]

Awesome writing, I'm starting to grow fond of your style, it has this uniqueness of yours, which I find quite artistic, romantic and beautiful. You're far a greater poet than I could ever dream to be, at least that's opinion. You make words flow gently and give meanings and thoughts so... I don't know if there's a word to describe it, but it is really amazing. Great poem.

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. a baby in a womb ... but of course ... it would not surprise me at all ... if you ended up proving to the world that you're in the top ten per cent ... when it comes to poetry ... lucky to have read this poem ...