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"Forget me not ", I will not say any more
for countless flowers have blossomed in the yard
and bees in frenzied swarms they allure ,
that hum , like the tune of a singing bard.

Let me thus dissolve and fade away .
Like winged seeds , in the winter gale , let me fly ,
until the wind dies down this fair day .

Then there let me fall , let me die , let me die .

Let me die and arise anew again
in any one of life's myriad forms

let me savor the pleasure of earth and rain
let me stand my ground against the storms .

Reviews

[Su' Nacnetaf]

Good poem, though a bit sad as well. If I may, perhaps you should change the "let me die..." of the last stanza for "Let me vanish and arise...", you may use a different word if you like, I just think the poem repeats "let me die" too much, however, this is just my opinion, it still remains being a great poem as it is, keep up the good work ^^

[Clemmy]

It is full of sounds, I love it though some sounds are really unpleasant. It has lots of imagery, it's amazing how you are able to pack so much in little pieces. You are good.

[Arabdha]

love the play of words you have used to describe one of life's greatest truths..probably the only..beautiful..reminds me of "do not stand at my grave and weep"..by mary frye..such is its intensity..keep writing

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you use such expressive words to paint so many
unforgettable images within wonderful rhythm...
i love this...

james

[deeps]

This is a wonderful write. Love the rhyme and flow.
Very nicely written.