A New Day

This is a very short poem but it is about little things that we see every day and might not appriciate.

I open my eyes

The bright sun shines in

It is a new day

 

Reviews

[steph]

They say the best things come in small packages you have proven that

[Alexander Loux]

this is short and refreshing. its like having a little mint to cool your mouth. reminds me of a haiku though it isn't one. very hopeful. nice job!

[KAREN]

Short but to the point! A new day can always bring better things and if the sun is out, that makes it better! Nice job!!