Thinker~

Written for Image #13 Picture This

There is a mood, it wraps inside my womb.

Encased by a garden of death held in my hand

The rays of light flow, once draped by magenta flowers.

Attached for all to see, his pink scented memories.

He comes for thee, with wicked in his mind

He takes me, for I have given thee.

Tomorrow is another day

Such lustful sorrow I shall see!

Author's Note

Need to add picture , that I wrote this for! Darn Mac, don't know how to save pictures!

Reviews

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

Your words have much depth and beauty here.It is a very poignant piece but the impact lies here in not revealing not too much or too less and leaving much to the reader's imagination for them to take the story ahead in their minds.I love the first line in particular.Thank you for sharing your words.

[Devons]

This poem adds quite a depth to the image it represents. There is an introspective power and gravity within it which, along with the mysterious lyricism of the abstract language, makes the whole thing rather compact and precious; like an elegy.
Although, with its air of mystery, the sense of meaning is half-elusive, half-glimpsed - it creates a profound impression.

[Poetic Beauty]

I like the descriptions in this piece. It makes me think of another time and another place. where men ruled society well the still do but not like this. It has an old world feel to me and I love how she feels in this poem.

[Brad]

very classy, reminds me of dickenson

[Larry Dyson]

I would like to pick your brain ..please?...tell me if you would ...exactly what each verse means to you , and why you wrote it?...I'm not challenging the piece of work.....I just want to understand it better...would you do that for Me?..you may send it offline if you want..i'm very serious about this ..it will help Me understan you better..Faye.. ty Laury [email protected]

[Benjamin Wright]

Quite a visual and pulchritudinous poem. Very nice Faye!

[Chris]

Interesting poem... I wonder the pic.

Chris