In a moment of time~

In a moment of time~

A Poem by
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Sometimes wouldn't you just want to stop the world that circles around you~

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If only, a breath of whispered lust could make time stand still we’d never part!











In that moment time stood still, do you know where your heart would beat~

As silences rush, to embrace my soul, a death seeps in that gravity cannot depart

The Reapers tears, in laughter at the thought of love~

The Angels cry, for this time, was so real~

Close your eyes with me my muse, feel the air lifting out of our your chests.

Leaving  our weak and tired muscles from  carrying these rejections around.

Feelings of confusion soon will disappear;  inhale with me so we can exhale our senses together!

Just the words whispered in that moment, would linger in the still air forever.

I’d hear your words so they are engraved into my soul, forever~

The warm breath, which escapes your lips, was carrying  for just a moment in time

 The happiness of love, that I know I could feel~

Time, is moving once again, I can feel the air back in my chest, my muscles are too weak to carry the rejection that I felt….

Gravity, departed, it is death I feel~

© 2011


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This poem was hypnotic. It gave me the sensation of drowning.
Thank goodness you pull us back up for air in the end.
Cryptic...Haunting work. Gave me a chill.

Posted 13 Years Ago


damn, this caused the biggest sigh that i ever felt/heard in my life!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is like a "Ying Yang" love poem. It kinda explains the good and bad side of love. JMO

I love the poem, Faye! Very impressive,

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 13 Years Ago



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