Stench~

Written for Creative Poetry Challenge... July 8th set of words~

The humid foggy air swirled, around this obstinate summer night.

Passing humiliation of with a flick of his tongue

Angles of the untamed pass you by, leaving you cringing with pain

Seeing the colorless circles before your eyes, taking you one step closer to hell.

You can feel your body go rancid, as it lays sprawled on the ground in the hot summer sweat.

Hallucinations pick your carcass up and carry it around.

Laughing out of control with the devotion of a hotheaded demon

Just released from 1000 years of the devils entrapment

Deviation from your reality, Spins fevering through your compressed brain.

He may have  won this battle, but the war will rage on~

Author's Note

First draft~~Prose!
Again, trying not to rhyme!

Reviews

[Benjamin Wright]

The clarity here is pulchritudinous. It surely makes you wonder....
(Fill in the blank.)

[Branch Isole]

So many great singular images here, woven together.
I love the line "Hallucinations pick your carcass up and carry it around."

[Poetic Beauty]

This makes me feel like someone is trapped in Hell that this war will go on for ages. The depth and clarity in this piece allowing me to witness the gruesome details. I have a feeling this person deserves every ounce of torment that is thrown at them. This is a stunning write. 100 %