Escape~

Creative Poetry Challenge. Plus learning to write Prose with no rhymes -another challenge.

Humid emotions swirl inside the devotions of a female imagination.

Yelling fervently loud,

provoking profusely at her thoughts.

 

Now she believes his silence,

the endless words that haven't cut through,

 clawing his lips for their escape.

These words lingering on his tongue

if ever  slicing through,

 they would  cause her heart to drain.

 

He never realizes, or does he?

 

His silence causes her to hemorrhage,

unequivocally for the world to see.

She’s drowning in the enchantment

of

the imaginary worlds.

 

She Boxed up

herself three walls,behind her eyes,

 Watching three movies ,play all at the same time.

Peeking out through,

her theater eyes

she can check on  her reality

Just as  quickly, she turns back to her fantasies.

 There is no blood, there is no fear, there is no hate, and there are no insecurities, there is

NO ONE.

 

Come crush, through these walls she begs of him, she is burying deeper into her own made up hell.

She throws a path of crumbs, out every day, and every day he passes, never looking inside her eyes.

The blackness that sits in his eyes, the silence that stays in his throat.

Makes her screech, with no self control!!!!!

Just f*****g leave me!

Would you please !

Go back inside your bedlam of silence.

AND SET ME FREE~

Author's Note

first draft....
Prose
PB challenge...

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

This screams loudly. LOVE ME OR LEAVE ME. HEAR ME OR RELEASE ME. Communication is very important in a relationship. I have messed up and realized the error I made. If too much time passes though it becomes frustrating and the love becomes stale. Cries in the night fall on muffled ears. Great descriptions poured into this piece. I want to hit the man with a frying pan or something to get his attention so he will hear what she has to say. Emotionally empowering. 100

[Larry Dyson]

very expresively written.. good use of emotive phrase...and adverbs...I like it..