Fairy Tale to tell~

The savory deepness

Clinched within his soul.

He Passes Low purrs,

To his undertones.

Sweet & Soft~

Intoxicating sound,

As they Swirling around.

 

What Joys of sight?

Gazing upon

This jungle cat

Agile & Sleek~

His massive body Soars

Gliding  into the coliseum

Bowing down his massive body~

Gently showing off his affections,

 Soothing her with his harmonized song

Hints of Laughter unfold, 

So bold, for he holds this fear.

 For a bounty on his skin.

His infatuations, to her flame

Burns him deeply into the night.

He quickly plays,

To leave his scent~

For one day he will return to her

In his true state.

 FMP Santos~

 

Author's Note

First Draft~

Reviews

[Larry Dyson]

panther ..panther in the night

he enters to display his might

his savory deepness

Clinched within his soul

does belay the control...

His infatuations, to her flame



Burns him deeply into the night.



He quickly plays,


To leave his scent~
.

[Poetic Beauty]

This is beautiful about jungle cats and well could refer to human men as well but this was done with such detail that it held m attention till the end.

[KAREN]

Use of the words were use so well. Great job on the flow! I found this poem to be beautiful as well.

[Larry Dyson]

nice do you know "Christine Feehan's "writing....her #5 in the darkseries is about panthers...and the carpathians and vampires of her World....you would like it...it is available on nook and other readers.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Spirited and reviled, a pure emotional river of words, well done