Something Real.

Something Real.

A Poem by
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A poem that I wrote a while back for that someone special of mine. ;P

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When I see your face, a smile instantly grows without distaste.

I can't hold these feelings back, especially when generosity isn't something you lack.

I don't know what I did to have someone like you, but there isn't a day when you let me be blue.

Never have I felt something like this before and I know that your personality is something to adore.

Just seeing a text from you brings up a smile, so would you keep it up for a while?

The way that you talk makes my heart stop.

When you sing, it's like we're in another world, just you and me.

The only reason I watch what you do is because I've never found somebody quite like you.

It's easy to just be me, especially when I feel this free.

While I'm in this trance, I realize that I'm glad we decided to give this a chance.

Imperfections and flaws are nothing and, honestly, I'm definetly not bluffing.

It seems as though I can tell you anything without having to worry about my heart aching.

Your words clear out all confusion and pain, slowly ending my suffering.

You're everything that I've asked for and even more.

Every day I pray that God will be in the middle of each day.

Even if I can't find the right words to say, it doesn't matter anyway.

Your expression says it all, never rude nor dull.

Things really aren't forced, but come naturally, you see.

Patience is the key and perhaps even - in our lives - a masterpiece.

They don't come often much, people like you,

So I know that something like this is true.

I hope you know that you really mean something to me and that this isn't just a false catastrophe.

Today is dedicated all to you; someone who has made the sky seem so much more blue.

Live up today as much as you want, it's your day to flaunt all that you've got.

© 2010


Author's Note

Ignore grammar problems.
I know it wasn't all that good. xD

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Your words clear out all confusion and pain, slowly ending my suffering.
You're everything that I've asked for and even more.
Every day I pray that God will be in the middle of each day.

I loved these lines, this is completely amazing, so full of deep emotion
Very well expressed. I like this one alot.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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False modesty dosn't become you, that aside, this is such a lovely poem of your adoration for that very special someone, drink deep from your loving cup, and may it never run dry. Excellent writing skills

Posted 14 Years Ago


This was really good :)
I know what its like to think that :D

I really loved it!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i enjoyed this poem. good job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your words clear out all confusion and pain, slowly ending my suffering.
You're everything that I've asked for and even more.
Every day I pray that God will be in the middle of each day.

I loved these lines, this is completely amazing, so full of deep emotion
Very well expressed. I like this one alot.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is heart warming. wish i had this!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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