Good and bad

almost 90% of people are the slave of their entire useless need that forces them to do useless work which gives them instant enjoyment but nothing benefit for their own.

God has given us

enough compatability,

that we can judge our life

with our ways,

BUT

their are some trap

that jams our mind

to judge right and wrong,

Its the entire need of a person,

that he needs instant enjoyment,

this useless needs stops us to do our main works,

The only one thing can stop it,

if we control our useless need and emotions

by praying the God.

Author's Note

everyone faces the problem with their entire useless need to get instant enjoyment

Reviews

[boyinblue]

I think I got the meaning you intended, however, you need to work on your english. All the necessary words are there, you just need to link them with the smaller ones, and spell a few more correctly.
Nevertheless, this is a very valid point in todays society. But then again, what is the solution. I think its just a way to cope with being the ants under the anteaters. Gd read though, keep it up, your improving.