Eye Fetish

Your eyes are most delightful

I would quite like to pluck them right out and embed them in glass

So that I might gaze into them any minute of any day

But unfortunately, you aren't a doll, dear,

And your eyes don't come out easily

Your eyes are so lovely

I would really like to kiss them and caress them

Just to know how sweet they taste

But unfortunately, you aren't a doll, dear

And to kiss your eyes would be to blind you

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like beautiful eyes also. Eyes can make us weak and forget what we want. I would do my best not to poke eyes out for pleasure. A interesting poem. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Paradoxical]

Very different and I like that. It's as though love itself would kill the other person. I've always been fascinated with eyes, I find them the most attractive part of a person. This is very interesting in how it's sort of melancholy.. Great piece!

[closed..acct]

This is really amazing!
I like the depth in it.
Awesome write