The World Has Done A Back Flip

It's not possible.

I'm,

Twinkling.

Liquid stars rush through my veins.

My skin is glittering.

My eyes are open.

Yet I am asleep.

 

I am sleeping

and dreaming.

Running past moments,

Fleeting.

The world has done a backflip.

 

Were there yings and yangs?

Were there blacks and whites?

No.

There were not.

 

He said he hated me,

I kissed him.

She said I was ugly,

I told her she was gorgeuos.

They booed me off stage,

I sang my heart out anyway.

 

There is no such thing as sadness

and badluck.

Or am I being too naive agian?

 

I close my eyes.

The world is bigger,

better.

 

You just have to feel it.

 

Reviews

[Dream Weaver]

A very strong write, despite a couple of
misspelled words.. Well done!

[Michael X]

I loved these lines, the entire piece reverberates with the consitant feeling
it's creative and realistic attributes are a real eye opener, two thumbs up:)
They booed me off stage,
I sang my heart out anyway.

[Blossom]

love it. it reminds me owl city songs. so pure and flow y. like always you never fail to express such vivid imagery.

[Dani]

It would be naive to believe that there is no such thing as sadness, but sadness is still a choice, regardless.

"I close my eyes.
The world is bigger,
better.

You just have to feel it."

I like those lines a lot. Great poem.