The World Has Done A Back Flip

It's not possible.

I'm,

Twinkling.

Liquid stars rush through my veins.

My skin is glittering.

My eyes are open.

Yet I am asleep.

 

I am sleeping

and dreaming.

Running past moments,

Fleeting.

The world has done a backflip.

 

Were there yings and yangs?

Were there blacks and whites?

No.

There were not.

 

He said he hated me,

I kissed him.

She said I was ugly,

I told her she was gorgeuos.

They booed me off stage,

I sang my heart out anyway.

 

There is no such thing as sadness

and badluck.

Or am I being too naive agian?

 

I close my eyes.

The world is bigger,

better.

 

You just have to feel it.

 

Reviews

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

I feel it! Great write!

[manifesto]

Seeing the world through those too-naive eyes would show everyone the hidden paradise we live on. The world HAS done a back flip, but whether it lands on its feet or not, it's all up to us... Great job! Again. ;)

[Cassiopia Summers]

This is inspirational. Great write.

[Kate Hunter]

nice job.

[kuru]

this was wonderful! I like the philosophical touch and the existentialistic feeling nice work!

[0tulissa]

100% sweetie!!

[Robin]

this poem dances in dream then leaps into a grand embrace of reality ~

[Geralyn Miller]

Twist upon turn again and again, like a spiral seaside shell, the final result, a work of beauty.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. I like the many twist in the poem. I like the positive emotion of this poem. Can't allow the negative to slow you down. The ending was outstanding. World have no limits for those who have no fear.
Coyote