Feminine

Lush Lush Lush,

Slush slush slush,

Oh how this feeling

elopes desires.

 

Hush hush hush,

Crush crush crush,

Pink satin lips

as rain drips.

 

Drip Trip

D

i

p

 

inside

 

and

Shush 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Chelsea]

Very nicely written. The flow carries out consistently through the entire poem. It's a relaxing poem to read, a gentle pice of work! As for criticismn, can't give any. You did it way to well !!
Thank you for contributing this to Poets Post. Take time and review other members :)
100/100 & added to my favourites!

[Robin]

sensual and evocative , " elopes desires " a gem

[manifesto]

It's an amazing poem, and I love the rhythm and the rhyme. I'm getting a "deeper meaning" vibe from it, though, trying to figure that out. :D The poem isn't only about feminity/femininity (whatever the word is), does it have something to do with flowers? Cause i'm starting to think it does...

[kuru]

what is it to be feminine..this seems to be like an ironic take on femininity..your poem is quite sexual but to be feminine it's taboo to talk about sexuality (well it is changing now) but used to be and it still is in many parts of the world.

[Matthew Kult]

Hello Saimas,

I too am thinking you are naughty, and I like it.

Regards to a dirty girl,

Jaidyn

[Dream Weaver]

Delicate as a flower, this write is
softer than cotton. Heavenly devine.

[Geralyn Miller]

You aare a naughty girl!
I love it!!!!!

[~Lizzy♬]

Cute! :)

[Atheana Kylee-S. C.]

Nice :)