Dear Formspring Anonymous,

This is a pantoum for an anonymous person who criticized me on Formspring for not making my poetry public, and hates me for no reason.

 

Dear Formspring Anonymous, I am a writer,

Just an FYI,

I don't mind you being a fighter,

You hate me for no reason & want me to cry

I'm sorry but just FYI,

I am no poser, I am just being myself

Your questions make me laugh since I just can't cry

Hatred isn't good for your time or health

I'm sorry you hate me for being myself

I read your anger flowing inside,

Your anger will no longer interfere with my health

You say you have the courage to unveil, but you still hide.

Formspring hate is what you are inside

I only want friendship, for I am no fighter.

I want your anger to no longer hide

Dear Formspring Anonymous, I told the world- I am just a writer.

 

 

Reviews

[SilentDreamer]

I really liked this, actually, it's interesting that someone would get mad at you just for that. With the poem itself- at times the poem seems unrelatable because you write it for a certain person. However some lines I can relate to which is interesting and a good aspect of the poem.
"I'm sorry you hate me for being myself
I read your anger flowing inside,"
I loved those lines. Very descriptive and creative.
I also liked the line, You say you have the courage to unveil, but you still hide.
Relatable lines written well. Also the ending is strong. A very well written peice.