Understanding

A Poem I never thought of. It just entered my mind as a thought and wrote itself. Please leave a comment describing what you think about the issue.

What I once thought dead

Has reawakened in my head.

I don't know why, I don't know how

All I know is that it revived now.

This love ha no home it has no place,

cause her emotions slapped me in the face.

Yet even a year after I forgot,

One bat of an eyelash awoke the lot.

I was lied to for so long,

But now I feel as if I belong.

I don't know what to make of all this inward trouble,

All I know is that for now it remains subtle. 

Author's Note

(Anyone who reads this and wishes to share or hear the story so they can give a thought to fix the problem is more than welcome, just leave a comment below).

P.S. The poem still is incomplete because it is the story of my ongoing trouble. So with people's help (and God's) I wish to end this poem.

Reviews

the point of the rythme scheme is to sound off to match the confusion.

[Ivy]

*has
The rhyme scheme sounds horribly forced (especially since the meter varies so much), though an aabb rhyme scheme is admittedly very hard to use without the result sounding trite. In any case, the idea is fine, the execution leaves much to be desired. I'd suggest using an abab rhyme scheme or free verse in the future.