Subconsious

I said one line and it rhymed. This is what I got after wards.

Love

So quiet so subtle so sweet,

That makes the heart skip a beat.

Fear

The wait that causes pain,

In your soul it starts to rain.

Pain

Causes some to not try,

The will you have begins to die.

Arrogance

Makes you think you know best,

Letting your mind stay in rest.

Why do people stay away,

Instead of trying to seize the day.

One day I hope you find out,

What your life is all about,

But until the day that you do,

To yourself always remain true.

Author's Note

Comment on your thoughts. I wrote this in ten minutes so I know it's not perfect, it's just what came to mind at the time.

Reviews

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i really like this poem, great read :D
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-Meja