Love's Long Lost

A poem I wrote about rejection and wanting.

Dear God of the light

Could you help me through the night

I ask this humble deed

In my time of great need

Their is someone I can't forget

And it is causing me to fret

It makes me suffer just to think

Of how love can disapear in a blink

What I once thought to be true

Was a lie and has left me blue

Now all I can do is try

To find an answer to why

I can’t stop thinking of her

And what we never were

Why must my life be like this

So cold while others are filled with bliss

All I can hope is that in time

I will find someone unlike this rhyme

A kind and loving soul

Who can fill this hole

And make me feel

Like the moment is not real.

Author's Note

Please comment. It let's me know what others think of the writing.

Reviews

[Charlotte]

It's really emotional and so very real =)
It's good.