Three?

Three?

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Just three?

May as well drink water!

 

“I like to peel off tape.”

Apparently, it’s like peeling off a scab.

 

I’ll need at least five

For tomorrow.

 

“I need a hug…and a beer.”

I’ll give you both.

 

I’ll stop after tomorrow.

© 2011


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Oh addiction. I like the tip-toed tap dance around the metaphor here. It's morose and yet playful. I think it kind of captures the median opinion of people in their twenties about excessive drinking. They kind of know it could be a problem, but they disguise it and laugh about it because of the popular culture. But then, eventually, that cold hard reality hits like a brick to the teeth. At least that was how I interpreted this. Excellent.

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This is... strange. And so true. Just, amazing. And strange. Kind of confusing but it's exactly what it's supposed to be. It's very good.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


I remember this type of lifestyle well.

Hey, what can you do, you pick your vices and hope no one gets hurt, well, except yourself usually.

I liked this, alot.


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh addiction. I like the tip-toed tap dance around the metaphor here. It's morose and yet playful. I think it kind of captures the median opinion of people in their twenties about excessive drinking. They kind of know it could be a problem, but they disguise it and laugh about it because of the popular culture. But then, eventually, that cold hard reality hits like a brick to the teeth. At least that was how I interpreted this. Excellent.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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