Verses for The Meditating Lord

 

Upon the mountains serene,

Blue skies lay infinitely above,

Opening the grand beauty of creation

Infinite to the eyes mortal…

 

It is in this serenity

A representation of vast infinity,

Within Earth

Resides the very Lord of Evolution…

 

Camphor white in color,

Ashen is His body divine,

Motionless and focused

An art perfectly still

In Another world in Earth,

All white and blue

The very core being is everywhere found…

 

In the meditative state,

The eyes keep serenity

Never open

Never closed…

 

Through Him every end has a beginning,

And what is perceived as evil,

Might have been a good all along…

 

The difference in indifference,

Destruction for creation,

There is universality in contradiction,

The very core of omnipotence,

All encompassing…

 

As He is in us,

We are in Him,

And have always been…

 

In His serene meditative state,

Motionless,

He holds control

From His reptilian necklace,

To the very universe

The astral planes,

Following the synchrony

Created by His dance…

 

 

Reviews

[Hedra Helix]

Dude beautyous because it moves like a helix spiral, (no relation) yet the lines dont meet and yet they do, they spin and sentences you leave off catch upon the next rotation and click together, and because you write of an archetype the edges cut off of ideas you describe finish flush in the readers mind and make this ONE you describe divine. To each of us, though I can tell he's a specific in your own mind.

Dr Seus moment

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

This piece is very beautiful and inspirational. It's as if you are encompassing many religions/spiritual beliefs in one and putting it into one poem. God/omnipotent is a great topic to talk about, because without him we wouldn't have these wonderful gifts of word we have! thank you for sharing. I always love your poetry.

[kurrupted]

Wow what a peice!...nice one.

[Malenkov]

an inspiring uplifting poem

[Barry!]

This is a very entrancing piece. Tons of ethereal imagery and interesting word choices. Clearly a keeper!

[James Takeo Panton]

This is very beautifully written!

[Pleiades]

I like how you left open some room for interpretation in this poem and that it could really mean anything to anyone; depending on their beliefs of course. I like how every line is powerful and that the entire poem conveys a beauty in its own.

-pleiades

[Krishna]

I enjoyed the cosmic scope of this piece, it has something of Shiva, Kali and Brahma in it to be sure. Is it written from any particular cosmological perspective? Do I detect the influence of say Hinduism in it?

I like the majestic neutrality to the poem, and yet I can't help but see the assumption that God-is-a-man paradigm in it, I wonder if that's just a matter of language and not the true intention behind it?

I guess I'd like to ask the author if he believes in an influencing or more of a watching divinity? Did God create the universe, or created and is present in the creation? It opens a whole lot of philosphical speculation, which I found stimulating.

Bravo for writing about something a bit more rare.

[Robert Luna]

When I was younger I was quite a violent person. I would fight to just fight. I was angry with the world and was going to try and make everyone pay for it in some way. I had a life changing experience where I held another man's life in my hands. Something awoke in me and I knew I had to change. I started meditating to center myself, knowing I had to become at peace with myself in order to find peace around me. This was many years ago and at that time the only books I could find on the subject were by Indian Authors which also help develop my appreciation for the Indian culture. I was able to make peace with myself and have since try to bring peace to others. That is a journey in itself but one i take on whole heartedly.

Great Job!!!!!!

[Luqman Qadi]

A beauty of reality in itself. Your evaluation of the unseen, shows your awareness of His ominpotence, and through these words you painted a picture of perfection. Terriffic piece! You have shown me in this piece another side of your humor...Smile

Luqman

[Blackbirdsong]

This poem evokes the feelings and emotions you describe quite well. It also shows a reverence and appreciation for divinity itself.