Momma's Secret Tears

My mom found the love of her life.. it last but a few years and...

The wind swayed as the leaves began crying out to me..

I heard the squeak of the floorboard beneath,

The vision came from the unknown.

 

I heard my momma secretly cry,

The tears of her very soul,

No one knows, how she loved him so..

 

Hopes and dreams of many good things,

What was meant to be,

Didn’t last very long for her or (even me).

 

His touch and Love is now her memory.

 

His face is clear and yet sometimes, not there.

His voice lingers in the air,

Sometimes life isn’t fair.

 

From Heaven I ask to borrow an angel for her,

Let the wings comfort and care,

When my momma cries her secret tears,

From her very soul, for they know she loved him so…..

 

For my Momma in remembrance of Mike Cody (Pops)

Reviews

[Blood Ink Diary]

And, well, this verse touches the hearts' chamber and twisted the artery -- what an ink, you have ! I actually have tears in my eyes. Can't write more, let me just relish your poem, deeply. Keep penning. Cheers

thank you kindly... I am honored to have touched you with my pen... Blessings

[Nitesh Mahabal]

So touching. Its So difficult to see a mother crying coz she always be strong n gentle to her kids. loved it.

Thank you kindly... for you comments and the time you spent visiting...Yes it is very hard to see a strong person,... cry... and not be able to do anything to help...

[Nitesh Mahabal]

Well Uve made many of them notice this through ur art. so u did ur bit. now its time for others to do their part

thank you again....very much..

[Nitesh Mahabal]

Ur Welcome Maam

[willweb]

Such a heart touching piece. Your words are as a sad love song sung to one who needs to hear the lyrics to understand...even if there is no chance they ever will. Nisa, this was gorgeous and makes my heart break for both you and your mom, but to have experienced the love of your life, well that is a good thing I would think.

Thank you kindly Willweb... I smile knowing that it has touched some readers...and its a way of honoring love however short doesn't lessen the depth of it..

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Losing your loved one to death is like dying yourself, wow for such a sad poem it was so beautiful written.

thank you so much!!! I am glad you seen the sad beauty in this piece...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

It was my pleasure, I am sorry for your and your mother's loss.

[Luna]

Touching piece of writing...love it!

Thank you very much!