The Notebook

The park, soft wind, a couple and yet.. they are not alive yet.

In the gentle rain.

Hand in hand,

Hearts bonding in love.

 

They talk and laugh.

He points to a blue bird,

She looks, he kisses her.

She embraces him.

 

They dance in the park,

With the leaves floating in the wind,

They set on a bench,

Never losing sight of each other’s love.

 

He picked a dainty flower,

Showed it to her,

Picked a petal off.

“She loves me, she loves me not.”

 

She took the flower

Tossed it over his back,

Laughed and kissed him.

 

Together, they watched

The sunset,

Embraced and joined in affection.

 

They watched the stars,

Smiled and bonded in

Love, spirit and heart..

 

My tears fall ever so slowly,

Sadly, I put down my pen,

If I could really make my writing

Become reality..

 

I close my notebook,

To let the characters

Bloom in the name of Love.

 

Author's Note

Most us desire that connection above and beyond all

Reviews

[Adam Whitworth]

I'm urged to write something because I enjoyed this poem so much

[LL]

Beautifully written. I enjoyed reading it!

thank you kindly

[Margo Seuss]

I am in total agreement! At least the characters can be real in our imaginations! I love how you underlined and bolded the line "Bloom in the name of Love." You made that beautiful line pop right out! This poem is simple; there are no complicated words or ryhming schemes. And yet it is delicate and profound. I am in love with your poem about love! Excellent work!

Thank you kindly... Love starts out simple in life doesn't it and then it arrives to so many different directions...

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Sometimes fantasy is a much needed break from reality… I didn't see that ending coming. Such wonderfully romantic images you conjured up.

Thank you kindly...for reading and replying. I am glad there was something in it that made you smile, ponder or think about..

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are most welcome.

[Madalyn Beck]

Wow. The ending is fabulous. I absolutely adore this piece because I too have felt the exact same way. Brilliant. (:

thank you kindly...for reviewing..stopping by and visiting my written voice.

[Sami Khalil]

"They watched the stars,

Smiled and bonded in

Love, spirit and heart"

All splendid...:)......................

thank you kindly

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome in kind...:).......................

[Stephen]

Heyy, Nisha ... Glad to be on your pages once again.
I loved this write especially this one stanza ..

He picked a dainty flower,
Showed it to her,
Picked a petal off.
“She loves me, she loves me not.”

It really made me smile. I loved the whole poem, from starting to an end because the characters you've plotted here are, am damn sure, much real and it's just came from your real life. I've figured out one more this through this beautiful poem that you've written it about those moments where you lived with your handsome someone in a park and it's all what you've just captured the gratifying moments into the words to save them for life in your portfolio to remind 'em in future...

Lovely write, "Nisha" I really loved this poem. You're truly a greatest writer ever and hey, I do again wish you much luck, "May you get published soon" cus, it'd be an honor to me to read your novels holding your books in my hands reading 'em with a cup of a tea all night.

Moreover, My best wishes are always with you, Dear Nisha. Do you know, why Do I always love reading your stuffs? Because every time whenever I do stop by on your pages, always learn much from you and through your stuffs I get a beautiful perception to look around the world because your thinking about love's pure and I love reading such kinda pieces mostly.

I love the title too, that's so beautiful... "Notebook."
Wonderful!
Keep Penning, Nisha. It's always my pleasure to read your marvelous stuffs.

Thank you so much. It is always lovely when you visit my pages.. I am honored that you think so highly of my writing. I do wish I had more time to float around and in between all the amazing writers here on the site. I am glad that we have connected.

[Stephen]

My pleasure. Thank you allot for your kind words, Nisha. Your words make my day. Thank you.
Yeah, am too honored we've connected and it'd always be an honor to hear from you. There's too many talented writers over this cafe's site but i'd consider you the best and the first greatest writer ever i've got with so much vast thinking. So, stay always creative, Nisha.

[Chris]

As real as a soft, gentle breath being exhaled out into the silent night...

The notebook is always filled with desires...those that we don't share as our own.. Thanks again for reading.. visiting..

[Chris]

You're welcome...