Words Not Spoken

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Sitting beneath this apple tree
Wondering if you'll remember me
When you're old and gray
Cause this is our last day

You said goodbye
And left with a sigh
Because I could never say
The words I thought each day

I love you

But now your gone
And it's only dawn
It's just me
Beneath this apple tree

Tears fall from my eyes
As I stare at the skies
Thinking if you may
Have ever wanted to say

I love you

The world is unclear
And reality became my greatest fear
Clouded by these memories
That belong in cemeteries

Loving you was all I had
Now that you're gone I've turned bad
Why did I choke
I simply should have spoke

I love you

Maybe you would be here
And I wouldn't have this tear
Our hands would still be intertwined
These thoughts wouldn't be on my mind

I never knew this pain
Could drive me insane
I have been ripped from the seam
And I just want to scream

I love you

Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Wow, Laura this is some deep writing right here! It's amazing how connected I was to this poem. I think this is my favorite work of yours! It has a great flow and rhyme to it. I know how it feels to think about how you should've told the guy how you truly felt before he walked away. Man, there were so many times that, that happened to me. It's a painful situation to ever go through. I sometimes wonder if he felt the same way as I did. Maybe that's also why I never told most of those guys the truth. Because I was afraid of being stood up or rejected to my face. Sometimes the truth hurts the most. Again, this is a fantastic poem! Keep up the good work. :D
Added to my library!

Ashley Rivers-- your friend ;)

[Rhea752]

very emotional. well written. great flow and word choice. good job!!!! :)

[D.]

A lot of feeling in this.

[Harley (arbiter)]

its really sad when this happens. You put that feling into the write very good. The question of what if is always on our minds. Great write. We all have things we should have said that we didn't and this opened my eyes. I think I'm gonna have a chat with someone now. Thank you