Some Days
A Poem by
 Every day is different from the last, so our emotions. 
Some days I am happy Some days I am sad Some days I want to have fun I want to cry I want to do everything I want to do nothing I want to love I want to hate I want to sing I want to scream I want to remember I want to forget I want to help I want to be selfish Some days I feel all this before breakfast
© 2012
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I really like your poem... My suggestion (only an opinion), I would leave the first "Somedays" and exclude the rest, until the last verse...and add more of why you feel these emotions... What makes you happy, sad, cry, etc...
I would end with the last verse as is.~(again just a suggestion)
A Good Start...Nice write. :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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I really like your poem... My suggestion (only an opinion), I would leave the first "Somedays" and exclude the rest, until the last verse...and add more of why you feel these emotions... What makes you happy, sad, cry, etc...
I would end with the last verse as is.~(again just a suggestion)
A Good Start...Nice write. :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on May 5, 2012
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