Love Immitation

Love Immitation

A Poem by
"

Don't cheat. Don't lie. Don't mess with other's feelings. It's not cool, bro.

"
Lying in this field
For the first time alone

You've moved on
But I can't let go

All the memories we made
Their love changed to pain

Your soft hands
And quiet heartbeat
I could never forget
You were the world to me

Thinking of you 
My heart in pieces

You broke it so carelessly 
Like snapping a twig

Your voice echoes in my ears
'I love you' you said

Your deep voice
And velvet hair
I may forget 
But you were the world to me

You made me strong
Your smile was enough

I loved you
But you didn't love me

And now I know
Strength comes from inside

Your shinging eyes
And fake love
I can forget
For you no longer ar the world to me

© 2012


Author's Note

Sooooo yeah it's 1 in the morning and I'm uber tired so this may or may not be a good poem? Please review :) I do appreciate all reviews good or bad!

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Added on July 14, 2012
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