Empty

Why do I feel this?

I have all I need

Why do I need something,
Something more

Just think abut the times I've had

And the ones I'll have next

But I believe that I have forgotten the times that I like best

I've wonder aimlessly in the dark abyss of my thoughts

And come out with one simple thing to ease my something

That one thing, is you and me

And happiness will come my way

Though I'm selfish and mean
And won't share my things

I will always be yours,

For the bells that ring

And the others that laugh

And the others that cry

I say

"What a good day, what a bad day"

And what I have is mine.

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[perfectlyadapted]

hmmm. It's kind of all over the place. Try focusing more. Use words to give it a rhythm (it doesn't have to rhyme or anything) and a direction.