I Wonder

To you
I wonder,
If you could see me, I would call you
I would call you to see if you would hear me
If you could hear me would you listen?
If you listened would you understand without judging me?
Judging me on who I am, what I do, and how I hear you
I hear you with fear inside me
Fear that if I listened I would fail to understand
I would not understand how you could hear, 

Hear, listen and understand without judging me
Still, my heart wonders, 

Wonders if you would forgive me
Forgive me because I love you
If only you could open your eyes and see me
I wonder
Love from me

Author's Note

This is the first ever poem I wrote. I always like to honour it by keeping it in my vault, kind of a door to the vault of the mysterious poems... ha-ha I say too much I know:)

Reviews

[Becca Bishop]

It's me!!! BOO!!!!!!
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Oh, gosh, sorry. I scared myself :P Anyway.
MAN I LOVE THIS!!!! It's so cool how you kind of start out the sentence with the idea of the last sentence. That's awesome ;D First ever poem??? You, my friend, are a poetic genius. I bow to your knowledge. At least, I would if I weren't sitting down and wasn't too lazy to bow. Sorry :P
Great job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D :D :D (aww, darn! I can't give this more than 100!!!)

[J. Write]

:) :) ;) Thank you Becca.

[Euro]

This is really nice!
I like how more is revealed as the poem goes on
Keep up the good work! :D

[J. Write]

Thank you :)

[†Tracey†]

I have suffered from the wonder bug a time or two and this is perfect in describing how you feel to a T .. :)

[J. Write]

Thank you:)