I Wonder

I Wonder

A Poem by J. Write

To you
I wonder,
If you could see me, I would call you
I would call you to see if you would hear me
If you could hear me would you listen?
If you listened would you understand without judging me?
Judging me on who I am, what I do, and how I hear you
I hear you with fear inside me
Fear that if I listened I would fail to understand
I would not understand how you could hear, 
Hear, listen and understand without judging me
Still, my heart wonders, 
Wonders if you would forgive me
Forgive me because I love you
If only you could open your eyes and see me
I wonder
Love from me

© 2012 J. Write


Author's Note

J. Write
This is the first ever poem I wrote. I always like to honour it by keeping it in my vault, kind of a door to the vault of the mysterious poems... ha-ha I say too much I know:)

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For the first poem you ever wrote this is amazing :}

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very beautiful and mysterious, it gave me the feel of a ghost trying to get through to someone they loved, desperately seeking forgiveness. Well done, and amazing write! ^^

Posted 12 Years Ago


For a first..not to bad but leaves a lot to question..I was so young when I started rhyming..I do not remember what I might have said..My mom and Grand mother were both published poets. Valentine

Posted 12 Years Ago


Life is certainly full of what ifs and fears... I love the vulnerable aspect of the poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


J. Write

12 Years Ago

Thank you for reading.
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

12 Years Ago

My pleasure
This is very good for a first poem! :D~ I really like it. You have noticed you're good at writing poems, books, stories, and chapters, right? ^-^''...

Posted 12 Years Ago


J. Write

12 Years Ago

Thank you reading my work :)
Iddy

12 Years Ago

No problem at all! I always love to read great work. ^-^.
Without considering that this is your first poem, it is of good quality. Some other time I might share the multiplicity of meaning I interpret from even a first reading. Poetry must have depth, as it seeks to tell much in only a few words. Most "poems" nowadays a randomly thrown words by bored individuals which has little or no depth and mystery. This piece, my friend, is poetry.

Posted 12 Years Ago


J. Write

12 Years Ago

Wow, Thank you for reading, and for your kind comments. I really appreciate your review. This is wha.. read more
Wow for your first poem that is pretty amazing

Posted 12 Years Ago


J. Write

12 Years Ago

Thank you :)
i love this, that inner monolog that plays out when you first start a relationship!

Posted 12 Years Ago


J. Write

12 Years Ago

Thank you for reading.
Wow!! really great poem!! I love it! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


J. Write

12 Years Ago

Thank you for reading.
This is really good!

Posted 12 Years Ago


J. Write

12 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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Added on November 22, 2012
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J. Write
J. Write

London, United Kingdom



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