I Wonder

I Wonder

A Poem by J. Write

To you
I wonder,
If you could see me, I would call you
I would call you to see if you would hear me
If you could hear me would you listen?
If you listened would you understand without judging me?
Judging me on who I am, what I do, and how I hear you
I hear you with fear inside me
Fear that if I listened I would fail to understand
I would not understand how you could hear, 
Hear, listen and understand without judging me
Still, my heart wonders, 
Wonders if you would forgive me
Forgive me because I love you
If only you could open your eyes and see me
I wonder
Love from me

© 2012 J. Write


Author's Note

J. Write
This is the first ever poem I wrote. I always like to honour it by keeping it in my vault, kind of a door to the vault of the mysterious poems... ha-ha I say too much I know:)

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A simply beautiful clarion call to Love, and all of its conundrums. Thank you.

Posted 11 Years Ago


this is beautiful, really open, honest, raw, passionate, a great piece of work 100% !!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lovely first poem!

Posted 11 Years Ago


haha,I know what you mean. I have my first poem I wrote on my profile.pretty good for your first write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is really good.
The repetition keeps the reader focused on what's to come and what to expect.
The imagery behind the words is so palpable.
Good job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow this is really good for a first poem..loved it

Posted 11 Years Ago


I love how this poem builds on emotion. This poem can definitely connect to a lot of readers.
Good Job
=P

Posted 11 Years Ago


Beautiful poem, you showed a lot of feelings. I love it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


i love it , very good write

Posted 12 Years Ago


:) good poem :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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J. Write

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