No Name

No Name

A Poem by J. Write

It has no name
Some say it has eyes, inner piercing eyes
Eyes that see beyond the words
Seeing past the huge distorted nose
Past those bits that you despise the most
Seeking the real you

Others claim they’ve seen its soul
Delicate, tender and faithful
Forgiving those who hurt it most
Freely giving without counting the cost
Loving, the real you

They are those with tears on their cheeks
Silently, they weep, drying tears that fail to dry
They whisper with caution on their lips
“We’ve seen it frozen." 
"We’ve felt it break,” they cry
When it’s hard, it’s ruthless - when it breaks, it hurts
Hurting, the deeper you

Is there no cure, I ask
"Time," the voices mumble, screaming and shouting
“Silence!” says the angel
Time heals but slowly it does
The only cure is love
It has a name
The heart
Finding, the real you

© 2012 J. Write


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Tex
An amazing write. love the layers, love the depth, love the message, it moved me.

Great style

I am amazed at the great writing i find on this site. This is a top shelf example.

thank you for this gift.

Posted 12 Years Ago


J. Write

12 Years Ago

Thank you:)
A lovely poem!!!

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J. Write

12 Years Ago

Thank you for reading.
This is just an amazing write. The way you depict the depth of emotions is really good. Love is the only cure. Great Piece!

Posted 12 Years Ago


J. Write

12 Years Ago

Thank you for reading.
This is beautiful. There are no words to describe. Brilliant. Just that.

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Mal
Wow. Just wow. It takes a lot of talent to write something like this..good way with words..keep writing :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


J. Write

12 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and reviewing.
I find this piece very thought provoking and full, containing a variety of emotions

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J. Write

12 Years Ago

Thank you for reading.
Wow amazingly powerful. Love is the cure for everything. Thanks for sharing

Posted 12 Years Ago


J. Write

12 Years Ago

Thank you for reading.
They are those with tears on their cheeks
Silently, they weep, drying tears that fail to dry

A beautiful couple of lines. A great poem, J. Write

Posted 12 Years Ago


J. Write

12 Years Ago

Thank you for reading.
This poem is simply wonderful. Very touching, intense and explores and soaks in so many emotions.True the heart sees what the mind cannot or seldom sees. Indeed a beautiful poem and very well written especially the last few lines.. Best Regards.

Posted 12 Years Ago


J. Write

12 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Loved this ..Lots of emotions and truths

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J. Write

12 Years Ago

Thank you for reading.

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J. Write

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