No Name

It has no name
Some say it has eyes, inner piercing eyes
Eyes that see beyond the words
Seeing past the huge distorted nose
Past those bits that you despise the most
Seeking the real you

Others claim they’ve seen its soul
Delicate, tender and faithful
Forgiving those who hurt it most
Freely giving without counting the cost
Loving, the real you

They are those with tears on their cheeks
Silently, they weep, drying tears that fail to dry
They whisper with caution on their lips
“We’ve seen it frozen." 

"We’ve felt it break,” they cry
When it’s hard, it’s ruthless - when it breaks, it hurts
Hurting, the deeper you

Is there no cure, I ask
"Time," the voices mumble, screaming and shouting
“Silence!” says the angel
Time heals but slowly it does
The only cure is love
It has a name
The heart
Finding, the real you

Reviews

[Valentine]

Fantastic..I knew from the first what the subject was and you described it perfectly..Well done..Valentine

[Kaylor Mason]

The human heart . . . such an unpredictable force

[J. Write]

True, and thank you for reading.

[Lover Of Words]

Awesome

[J. Write]

Thank you :)

[Lover Of Words]

My pleasure

[SHEEMA HUQ]

This poem feels like a converstaion with your own heart and physical demeanor, i thought it was very cleverly contructed, well done.

[J. Write]

Thank you :) sorry this is late.

[SnuggleBunnyQueen]

WOW! This was really deep and intense! I found myself trying to read it faster because I wanted to know what was going to be said next. I really think that the truth behind your words are so exact that its eerie, but a good way.

[J. Write]

Thank you so much for your kind words.

[SnuggleBunnyQueen]

I would love to actually work on a few pieces with you if you would like. I know that I need the help and maybe some advice.

[Ohhhwillow]

Deep stuff dude, this is awesome!

[J. Write]

Thank you:)

[luviva]

just awesome!!!!!11

[J. Write]

Thank you for reading:)

[An owl on the moon]

Your words take us deep within to a world as vast as the heart and mind.. finding a name.. finding healing.. finding life. So poignant.

[J. Write]

Thank you for your kind words :)

[Phillitup]

utterly brilliant

[Moniba]

Oh.My.God. This is....the best. No more words for it... :')

[J. Write]

Thank you:)