Contractor (Complete)
A Book by Outdated Account
 Do you value your identity?  © 2016 Outdated Account
Author's Note
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As of 10/30/16 Contractor is complete and fully viewable.
Major note: This is not the final draft. This is pre-publication.
Musical theme: Hurts - Weight of the World
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Since this is pre-publication what kind of feedback are you looking for now... gearing up to do a slow careful this read through- its a really interesting piece.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
For the time being I'm looking more at continuity and serious grammar flaws. The more subtle struct.. read moreFor the time being I'm looking more at continuity and serious grammar flaws. The more subtle structural things have already likely been fixed, but if you feel like it's important to point out by all means point away.
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7 Years Ago
Honestly my first thoughts would be that the whole story should be expanded past a young adult novel.. read moreHonestly my first thoughts would be that the whole story should be expanded past a young adult novel...
the characters and story are there to develop it into even a more mature piece.
the relationships are intriguing and it's shorter than it could be since everything is developed pretty well- i'm not a grammar stickler like to give my input on flow and how I've read the story and made sense of it- but I'll probably do that chapter by chapter in the next few days.
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Added on October 25, 2015
Last Updated on November 21, 2016
Tags: novel, full length, serial, death, the grim reaper, grim reaper, business, contract, contracts, contract law, deal, deal with the devil, supernatural, paranormal, fiction, adventure, etc., macabre
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