Hurt

jus a short sad poem

I sit here staring at my screen

Did I do the right thing

Why do I want to scream

I'm the one who did it but it still stings

It's pain I can't describe

And I know it's not going to go away

I'll try to stay alive

I hope he forgives me someday...

Reviews

[wordman]

well i see you met our troll david g demers from mc henry ill,over look the idiot ,ignore and block,but be assured he`ll be back with a new name and i enjoyed the poem

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Hey my friend. Long time no see.
Umm... Can't we get permission from a site mod to hack his account, and jus block him, and all the email addresses leading back to him, from registration?

[wordman]

we have tried many times,he had over 100 accounts at once,charlie had deleted quiet a few
but he just keeps on coming

[Dani The Unreviewed]

I mean, whenever he registers, he needs an email address. email addresses lead back to the same spot if the same person made them, now he could ban all emails, which lead back to him. hell, we might as well give him a small virus, which would tell the site, that the jerk off isn't allowed in here.

[wordman]

someone sent me his i p address,i sent it to charlie via the secret mod,he never blocked him !

[wordman]

i forwarded all his e mails and comments to the mc henry ill police dept,they went out on him, a few weeks later he was back..if i knew how to send a virus to him,i would

[Dani The Unreviewed]

maybe it was a fake IP. and if it's blocked, he'll fake another one and done.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

I know how...but it's a lot of work...and we need site mod permission, and privilege to do so.

[wordman]

well i`m sure he wont he was kicked off deep under ground poetry last year..he is a total idiot,i have talked to him on the phone ,i mean a real nut case

[Dani The Unreviewed]

well can you ask a mod if they'd plant the virus in his account, if I coded it?

[wordman]

the mod just wants everyone to block and ignore him,the owner don`t want to deal with it

[Dani The Unreviewed]

then my friend, we're fucked. I could do the illegal thing... but I'm not an expert...and it's not worth the risk ...

[wordman]

he don`t bother me much,he knows i don`t take his s**t ! he will leave a few sarcastic comments
read morehe don`t bother me much,he knows i don`t take his s**t ! he will leave a few sarcastic comments
then he will block me,just block his sorry a*s,hell i have wrote a couple poems about him,really pissed him off

[Dani The Unreviewed]

I could also put the virus online, to a page, and have it download as browsers would usually download cookies .. but, think about how many other people would get the same virus? collateral damage would be too much... and if we'd warn everyone not to open the page? he'd hear about it, and all the effort was wasted.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

nonetheless, I want to put him offline, for good. email addresses could also work...unless the antivirus spots the glitch in the code, or he doesn't open the message ...so idk what to do.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

A question... With all the new writers coming here, young people, old people ... Are we really going to just stand back, and watch him troll around?! Like...With simply ignoring the problem, doing nothing about it, we become completely irresponsible, ignorant jerks!

[wordman]

the owner of the site should not let it happen ! it is his resp, to take care of it ,he has ran off several people here allready with his bull s**t the owner is charlie koshner,he posts poems here from time to time,maybe we can reach him in a comment,he don`t seem to answer his mail

[McBear]

He probably has a dynamic IP and or proxy/VPN so his IP doesn't lead to his location.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

yes. logical. but there are other ways of tracking him ...right?

[McBear]

I have heard of ways experienced hackers and the FBI does it. But it is honestly nothing the average person has access to. He might be, in the end, just be one of the moderators! lol

[Dani The Unreviewed]

wait...if I'd make a virus, and somehow infect his device ...I could get access to his network settings...and find his location via the provider ...like Google services in android devices. .precise location by getting network location.

[wordman]

one of my friends has already gotten his i p address

[McBear]

Getting his IP isnt hard. It is just the fact if that is an IP from a vpn or something to hide his location.

[wordman]

he must have read my comment,he sent me a message then closed the site,i sent it to the secret modread morehe must have read my comment,he sent me a message then closed the site,i sent it to the secret mod
this idiot posted a bad review on my compant on yelp a few months ago ,he deleted the complaint when i reported it,he is threatening me again, lol he is running scared

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

this is amazing and powerful, and emotional. i love it

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Forgive? I did already. I know you didn't love me. Jus played around. I should have seen it. But like I've said ...I'm a useless idiot. Don't worry about me hun. find yourself someone you can love, and live happily.

[RJ]

i cant tell you why i left, but i do love you. You deserve better and I never could have made you truly happy.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

you could have. I know. cintsalis told you about that one monster in my head, that I can't stop. or at least I couldn't, until I didn't write the second "poem " she asked for, about my first ex.
and you probably found someone better already. so I won't push it any further.

[RJ]

found someone better? nope. think whatever you want though.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

lol. Hans thinks you're me. lol
well, IF ANYONE WANTS PROOF, THEN JUST ASK FOR IT! :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

all he does is talk. I've got evidence, to prove him wrong. thank you.

[RJ]

dude... we arent even in the same country..... if you were here i wouldnt need to be on here because you're my life *cuddles up to you and kisses your cheek*

[Dani The Unreviewed]

True. *wraps arms around you.*
but we got our own fbook profiles, and tons of friends to confirm that we're together. I love you, no matter what anyone says.

[RJ]

Tessa would definatly confirm..., She hates me now :(

[Dani The Unreviewed]

I'll settle that with her, you shouldn't worry about it too much. *hugs you*

[RJ]

*hugs back* I don't think she'll forgive me for hurting you do bad

[Dani The Unreviewed]

She will. Jus trust me. :)

[RJ]

Okay :) lets go to message before the dude gets upset with us and comments again

[Dani The Unreviewed]

hahahahaha :D okay.
but who cares about some random troll anyway?

[RJ]

he's kinda mean :( I asked him if he was okay and he kept calling me you and saying i should jus quit pertending... Don't get mad i feel like he's been hurt :( n i wanted to help him but he refused

[Dani The Unreviewed]

oh yea..now I remember ... I commented some nice stuff on his reviews, when he was trolling around on friends writings. So he got upset. Lol. I have been accused with having fake accounts, and "pretending". Thou, I've got no idea, why. so I stopped caring about it. people jus got jealous I guess.

[RJ]

of us? I mean I get why they'd be jealous that i have you because well... you're amazing but im nothing sooo

[Dani The Unreviewed]

maybe of us too. *shrugs * people are getting low these days. hehehehe. you're everything to me, and you know it. *kisses you*

[RJ]

*goes bright red kissing back and hides in your chest*

[Dani The Unreviewed]

*wraps arms around you* you're sooo cute when you blush.

[McBear]

I feel a forever lasting relation *sniffs air* I do.