The Actions

Just to make it clear

I do not need to dissapear

 

Ill be on my way

This is the time for honesty

 

You will up the size

But I will not organize

 

My voice will only play

When the actions begin to say

 

I love I love I love I love

I love I love I love I love

 

To begin the dreaded day

With you wrapped around me

And your smile tempting to say

Please don't ever stop loving me

 

Then you will up the size

But I will not organize

 

My voice will only play

When the actions begin to say

 

I love I love I love I love

I love

Everything about you

 

Just to make it clear

I do not need to dissapear

 

Ill be on my way

This is the time for honesty

 

You will up the size

But I will not organize

 

My voice will only play

When the actions begin to say

 

I love I love I love I love

I love I love I love I love

I love I love I love I love

I love I love I love I love

Reviews

[Nae Nae]

This has real good heart and soul in it ... it radiates a sense of attachment

[Deanna]

I really like how powerful this sounds. Even though there are lines that suggest you're only living for the one person you love, it still rings out power to me.

[Jacquelene Vanessa More..]

this is great! i love this. it's very beautiful and has good flow

[J.P.O.et]

Not bad, really like the 6th verse, the quartet lines
there. Those were the best
'To begin the dreaded day
with you wrapped around me'
Keep scribing
J.P.O.et

[VERONICA]

AWW! I love this! One note: I don't understand "You will up the size" maybe I"m just culturally illiterate but I've never heard that phrase before and can't infer what you're trying to say. I absolutely love the diction in this though. It almost seems as if it could be a song with the repeated lines.

Out of curiousity: Why did you choose to rhyme?

Well done!