A Wonderful Night Turned Horribly Wrong

A wonderful night turned horribly wrong as I sit up in my bed

Crying and shaking from the thoughts in my head

Seeing you made me happy for just a short time

Until I remember that you are not mine

You don't know how I feel, you can't read my heart

You don't know how much I miss you every time we're apart

You tell me about her, but I know every word

She's my best friend, so from her I have heard

I know you're in love and dancing on air

But I sit here and weep, I feel it's unfair

I knew you first, and I know you more

She knows you so little, of that I am sure

It took you no time to fall for her deep

Does she take up your thoughts in waking and sleep?

I'll help you along, I'll be so productive

Because more than anything, I'm so self destructive

A wonderful night turned horribly wrong as I sit up in my bed

You're the one in my thoughts, you fill my head

Author's Note

All feedback appreciated

Reviews

[lee von cleef]

the trap of friends in life,hard to stay in bounds,when we are all dogs,men that is,Girls they stay true,they forget a one night stand,but you...are tormented...a good write.

[Samantha Wilkey]

Beautiful poem. The flow is perfect, the emotion of how you feel and what you think is aslo very well put into place. Very beautiful!

[Jordan Dickinson]

Great poem! I loved the flow, and emotion in every line!

[Tardisbaby]

I really like this. It sort of reminds me of the song 'On my Own' from Les Mis.

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Very emotional piece . The rhyme scheme flows smoothly throughout your poem. Good work.