Realize

Realize

A Poem by Elizabeth Reed

The moment you realize they've left you
They've left you and they don't care
Is the moment that takes your breath away
And leaves you gasping for air

They've gone and have forgotten
Forgotten everything you've shared
They just turn around and leave you
Like they never even cared

Now you sit alone, scarred and weak
Wondering what you've done
Wondering why they've left you
You never hurt any one

A single tear slips down your cheek
You realize you're alone
No one will ever give you
All the love you've ever shown

© 2012 Elizabeth Reed


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Elizabeth Reed
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You have an innocent heart that can love and give.
You are devastated when you are betrayed and left alone.
Don't worry,there must be some innocent people like you who love you,give you and adore you.
Just be patient and wait how all the blessed events happen.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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A single tear slips down your cheek... Nice write...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You have an innocent heart that can love and give.
You are devastated when you are betrayed and left alone.
Don't worry,there must be some innocent people like you who love you,give you and adore you.
Just be patient and wait how all the blessed events happen.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 22, 2012
Last Updated on September 22, 2012
Tags: Sad, Heart break, depressing, dark, loss, lost

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Elizabeth Reed
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I absolutely love to write, but I'm not very confident in myself. I would love honest feedback. Negative or not. If you'd like to see pictures of my characters, go to my photos. The letter(s) at th.. more..

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